The charts below give information on the location and types of dance classes young people in a town in Australia are currently attending. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below give information on the location and types of dance classes young people in a town in Australia are currently attending.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given pictures illustrate the number of participants in various places and types of dance classes in Australia.
Overall
, the pie chart demonstrates that the majority of people attend private studios,
while
the least number choose college-based ones. The bar chart indicates that ballet was the most popular across all age groups.
According to
the pie graph, 48% of the participants opted for private clubs, making it the most popular venue, followed by school and community halls at 24% and 18%, respectively. College-based classes have the lowest attendance, with only 10%, one-fifth of the highest. In the bar chart, ballet sessions have the highest enrollments, with 600 kids under 11 , double that number for 11-16 teenagers. Tap dance attracted 450 children younger than 11 and 420 in the 11-16 age group
whereas
modern ones had the fewest students under 11, with 300, but more than 500 children aged 11-16 attend these classes, nearly double the younger group.
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  • attending
  • currently
  • location
  • variety
  • ballet
  • hip-hop
  • contemporary
  • jazz
  • venues
  • popularity
  • attendees
  • juxtaposing
  • correlating
  • proximity
  • cultural influences
  • trends
  • anomalies
  • monopoly
  • proportion
  • distribution
  • enrollment
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