The chart below shows the number of international applicants to the universities of one European country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The bar chart illustrates the number of international
applicants
from China, Japan
, the USA
, and Russia to the universities of a particular European country between 2004 and 2008.
According to
the figures, in 2004 Chinese
applicants
were the most numerous, reaching around 28,000, followed by the USA
with approximately 23,000 applicants
. Furthermore
, Japan
and Russia had significantly fewer applicants
, with about 8,000 and 5,000 respectively. By 2005, the number of Chinese
applicants
decreased to about 22,000, while
applicants
from the USA
slightly dropped to 20,000. Nevertheless
, Japan
saw a modest increase to 10,000, and Russian applicants
remained stable at around 5,000.
It can be seen that from 2006 to 2008 Chinese
applicant numbers
slightly decreased but then
rose again, peaking at approximately 27,000 by 2008. Moreover
, the USA
experienced a rise in 2006 to around 22,000 and continued to increase, reaching 24,000 by 2008. However
, Japan
’s numbers
steadily grew, reaching 15,000 by 2007 and maintaining that level in 2008. Russian applicants
remained the lowest throughout the period, with minimal fluctuations, around 5,000 to 6,000.
Overall
, Chinese
and American applicants
consistently dominated in numbers
, with China leading most years. Japan
showed a steady increase, while
Russian applicant numbers
were the lowest and relatively stable.Submitted by eparfenenkov on
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