You are studying English at a private language school attended by many international students. You are planning a surprise birthday party for a friend who has been feeling particularly sad and homesick. Write to another classmate and invite him/her to the party. In your letter: explain the reason for the party give the date and time of the party suggest what the classmate could bring to the party Write at least 150 words.

Dear Jay, I am writing
this
letter to invite you to attend the party which I am going to
organsie
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organise
in the next weekend. Because
devarsh
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Devarsh
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has been feeling alone here and his
birthday
coming, it is
the
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great idea to become
the
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part of his happiness which can make his
birthday
memorable. Because we have an exam on his
birthday
, I have planned to celebrate his
birthday
on the next day of his
born day
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birthday
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which is 7th
july
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and the party time would start at 7:00 P.M.
However
, I have arranged all the
necessery
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necessary
things but,
only
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a
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thing left
is
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snakes and
coldrinks
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cooldrinks
cold drinks
and please bring
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an uno
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uno
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a
card to play
it
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at
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in
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the party. Looking forward to hearing from you. Regards, Ankit
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coherence cohesion
Consider checking for minor grammatical and spelling errors to improve the overall clarity of your letter.
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Try to elaborate a bit more on the specific reason Devarsh has been feeling sad and homesick, which will give a clearer context for the party and make your letter more engaging.
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You have clearly stated the purpose of the party and provided the date and time.
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The tone of your letter is friendly and inviting, which is suitable for writing to a classmate.
coherence cohesion
Your letter has a proper structure with an opening, body, and closing, making it easy to follow.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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