The line graph shows the cost for watching films. The pie charts show the shift in the percentage or market share among the three types

The provided graph illustrates the price for watching films,

while

the pie chart represents the percentage of market share among the three types: going to the cinema,

legal

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downloading and renting a DVD.

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,

while

the costs of all services escalated over the period of six years, the market shifted from renting

DVD

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DVDs

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to watching films online, demonstrating changes in consumer preferences towards digital consumption. So, in 2005, the most popular way of watching movies was renting

a DVDs

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, the percentage of which stood for 59%, and the costs

on

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those were always stable- from 6 to 8 dollars.

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, in 2011, the situation changed dramatically and the number of

DVDs

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consumers dropped enormously to just a quarter of all share. As for the

others

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ways of watching movies it could be said, that in 2005 legal downloading was the least popular and accounted for only 5%, despite prices not being very high,

some time

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even lower than

on

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renting DVDs.

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, in 2011, the number of people who were downloading films legally increased greatly to slightly more than half of all consumers. And, the

last

one

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way of watching movies was going to the cinema. In 2005 the percentage stood

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36%,

although

six years later it became twice less than it was, which is not surprising, considering prices for it – from 8 to 14 dollars for one ticket which is not exactly profitable.