The line graph shows the cost for watching films. The pie charts show the shift in the percentage or market share among the three types
The provided graph illustrates the price for watching films,
while
the pie chart represents the percentage of market share among the three types: going to the cinema, Linking Words
legal
downloading and renting a DVD.
Change the word
legally
Overall
, Linking Words
while
the costs of all services escalated over the period of six years, the market shifted from renting Linking Words
DVD
to watching films online, demonstrating changes in consumer preferences towards digital consumption.
So, in 2005, the most popular way of watching movies was renting Fix the agreement mistake
DVDs
a DVDs
, the percentage of which stood for 59%, and the costs Correct the article-noun agreement
DVDs
a DVD
on
those were always stable- from 6 to 8 dollars. Change preposition
of
However
, in 2011, the situation changed dramatically and the number of Linking Words
DVDs
consumers dropped enormously to just a quarter of all share.
As for the Fix the agreement mistake
DVD
others
ways of watching movies it could be said, that in 2005 legal downloading was the least popular and accounted for only 5%, despite prices not being very high, Correct quantifier usage
other
some time
even lower than Replace the word
sometimes
on
renting DVDs. Change preposition
apply
Though
, in 2011, the number of people who were downloading films legally increased greatly to slightly more than half of all consumers. And, the Correct word choice
However
last
Linking Words
one
way of watching movies was going to the cinema. In 2005 the percentage stood Correct pronoun usage
apply
for
36%, Change preposition
at
although
six years later it became twice less than it was, which is not surprising, considering prices for it – from 8 to 14 dollars for one ticket which is not exactly profitable.Linking Words
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