The maps below show the layout of a university’s sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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These charts depict the layout of a
collage's
athletic centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment. It is clear from the graph that there Correct your spelling
college's
is
a lot of Correct subject-verb agreement
are
places
demolished and others replaced with new places
and there are a few places
that get expanded.
According to
what is shown, the plan for the gym we can see it is will expand and the outdoor court will merge with the sports
centre and replace it with a sports
hall on the Eastern side and a Leisure pool on the western side and will be built many sites like Three changing rooms one at the centre of building another two ones at corners , sports
hall, a small sports
shop and cafe one besides
both changing room. Also
, two dance studios will be constructed on the eastern west
side.
Add a hyphen
eastern-west
To sum up
we could say that, the new building will have a lot of places
in contrast
with the previous one which has limited services.Submitted by jqanber4 on
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