You recently took part in a training course. The organizer of the course has asked you for some feedback. Write a letter to the organizer of the course. In your letter you should: - Give details of the course you took part in - Say what you found useful on the course - Suggest ways the course could be improved Write at least 150 words
Dear organizer,
I’m writing to inform you about the
last
course
that I graduated in your school. It was a
IELTS preparation training Change the article
an
course
which started two months ago. The training was not online, but in class with a really friendly group and a supportive teacher. Those small features made my experience really pleasant.
Every single lesson was a useful tool for improving my overall
band score. That is
why I am here to thank you for all details
and support which made the experience brilliant. Correct article usage
the details
Firstly
, the structure of the lessons allowed me to understand better the exam’s tasks and to boost the speed of doing the exercises. Secondly
, this
course
allowed me to meet new people with the same dreams, so we made powerful friendships. Moreover
, I really appreciate that the course
taught me crucial tips and tricks for a better band score. To illustrate, with solely a small advice
from my teacher I started to get more points in Correct quantifier usage
piece of advice
reading
and listening Correct article usage
the reading
part
.
Fix the agreement mistake
parts
Additionally
, I truly believe that you will hear my personal disappointment despite all those beautiful things. I would recommend to modify
the schedule Change the verb form
modifying
on
a later hourChange preposition
at
,
because at 4 PM it is quite inconvenient to attend Remove the comma
apply
at
the classes. But, Change preposition
apply
overall
, if we are eliminating this
little thing, I will give you a five stars feedback, because I’m grateful for everything that you and your school have done for me.
Best regards, Selina.Submitted by nicolletameriacri on
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task achievement
While the letter addresses all parts of the task—details of the course, what was useful, and improvement suggestions—be sure to elaborate a bit more on each point to provide a more thorough response.
coherence cohesion
Ensure the logical flow of the text by using more linking words and phrases to guide the reader through your thoughts.
coherence cohesion
Try to have a clearer separation between different ideas by using more paragraphs, especially when introducing a new point.
task achievement
The letter is polite and has an appropriate tone, making it suitable for the context.
coherence cohesion
Your greeting and closing are both very well done, adding a nice touch to the overall presentation of your letter.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite