The chart below shows the percentage of the day working adults spent doing different activities in a particular country in 1958 and 2008 (Steve no copyright)

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chart illustrates the proportion of various physical work grown

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people

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do throughout the day in a precise nation in both years 1958 and 2008.

Overall

, adults spend more time working and sleeping and perform less time in their journey to jobs or

leisures

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leisure

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or physical

activities

. In the year 1958, job and sleep were the main

activities

of grown people, respectively 33% and 32 % . With low transport time to work

that is

only 2% and sports 6%.

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adults

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adults'

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working period has

increase

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of

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9%

overtime

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over

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, followed by journey to jobs

6

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%, and their relaxation moments been 5% in 2008. In 2008,

outdoors

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activities

have drastically

reduce

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with

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up to 13% less than in 1958.

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,

period

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of sleep

also

noticed a decline of 7%

that

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is from 32% to 25%.

However

, areas of interest like physical

activities

and

leisures

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leisure

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have been constant

to

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6% in both years.