The bar chart shows the level of life satisfaction and income in America.

The bar chart shows the level of life satisfaction and income in America.
The bar chart gives information about the changes in well-being in relation to the
income
earned by individuals in the USA.
Overall
, it can be seen that the happiest
income
group are those, who earn over $ 500,000 a
year
,
however
,
people
who earn under $ 10,000 a
year
report high levels of unhappiness. The
people
, who have
income
between $10,000-$20,000 and $ 40,000-$50,000 a
year
have almost the same levels of satisfaction.The level of individuals,who are very satisfied is around 47%- 57%, between 23%-33% of some
people
are just satisfied.
Also
, 10%-21% of
people
are dissatisfied and around 4-11% of
people
very
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dissatisfied in their
life
. There is quite a similarity between the
income
$
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50,000-$75,000 and $ 100.000-$150,000 a
year
. The level of
people
,who are very satisfied is around 64%-72% and 26%-33% of individuals satisfied with their
life
.
Moreover
,
this
category has just around 2%-5% of some
people
dissatisfied.
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positive category of
people
is between $150 000-$250 000 and more than $ 500.000
income
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per
year
. In
this
category around 90%-100% of
people
are very satisfied with their
life
and a little part of
people
have
life
satisfaction.
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