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The bar chart shows the level of life satisfaction and income in America.

The bar chart shows the level of life satisfaction and income in America.
#bar #level #life #satisfaction #income #america
The bar chart gives information about the changes in well-being in relation to the
income
 earned by individuals in the USA.
Overall
, it can be seen that the happiest
income
 group are those, who earn over $ 500,000 a
year
,
however
,
people
 who earn under $ 10,000 a
year
 report high levels of unhappiness. The
people
, who have
income
 between $10,000-$20,000 and $ 40,000-$50,000 a
year
 have almost the same levels of satisfaction.The level of individuals,who are very satisfied is around 47%- 57%, between 23%-33% of some
people
 are just satisfied.
Also
, 10%-21% of
people
 are dissatisfied and around 4-11% of
people
very
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 dissatisfied in their
life
. There is quite a similarity between the
income
$
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50,000-$75,000 and $ 100.000-$150,000 a
year
. The level of
people
 ,who are very satisfied is around 64%-72% and 26%-33% of individuals satisfied with their
life
.
Moreover
,
this
 category has just around 2%-5% of some
people
 dissatisfied.
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 positive category of
people
 is between $150 000-$250 000 and more than $ 500.000
income
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 per
year
. In
this
 category around 90%-100% of
people
 are very satisfied with their
life
 and a little part of
people
 have
life
 satisfaction.
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