The bar chart below shows average UK salaries, by city. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. Graph: Average UK salaries, by city.
The graphic represents the mean wages of 7 cities in
UK
.
Correct article usage
the UK
overall
,the chart represents the number of samples
per city and the average salaries in that city . There is a difference of around 8000 pounds between the highest and lowest paid
cities . The number of Add a hyphen
lowest-paid
samples
in the top paid
city is more than 10 times of others
London , England has the highest pay of 33,634 from 50951 Add a hyphen
top-paid
samples
. whereas
Cambridge England is at
Change preposition
in
the
second place with 29,854 pounds , the number of Correct article usage
apply
samples
there is the least at 2180 . Bristol as well as
Edinburgh has almost similar wages .
Manchester and Glasgow share almost at par salaries with Glasgow being slightly more . Birmingham has more
sample size than Edinburgh and Cambridge but the wages Fix the agreement mistake
a larger
is
at the lowest among the 7 cities at 25,531 pounds only . The sample size though 2949Change the verb form
are
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