The bar chart below shows average UK salaries, by city. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should Graph: Average UK salaries, by city.
The graphic represents the mean wages of 7 cities in
UK
.
Correct article usage
the UK
overall
,the chart represents the number of Linking Words
samples
per city and the average salaries in that city . There is a difference of around 8000 pounds between the highest and Use synonyms
lowest paid
cities . The number of Add a hyphen
lowest-paid
samples
in the Use synonyms
top paid
city is more than 10 times of others
London , England has the highest pay of 33,634 from 50951 Add a hyphen
top-paid
samples
. Use synonyms
whereas
Cambridge England is Linking Words
at
Change preposition
in
the
second place with 29,854 pounds , the number of Correct article usage
apply
samples
there is the least at 2180 . Bristol Use synonyms
as well as
Edinburgh has almost similar wages .
Manchester and Glasgow share almost at par salaries with Glasgow being slightly more . Birmingham has Linking Words
more
sample size than Edinburgh and Cambridge but the wages Fix the agreement mistake
a larger
is
at the lowest among the 7 cities at 25,531 pounds only . The sample size though 2949Change the verb form
are
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