In the future all cars, busses and trucks will be driveless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

These days, self-driving cars from Tesla

is

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becoming popular and not only cars but

also

buses and trucks are becoming

driveless

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driverless

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. The debate between

we

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whether we

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can trust

driverless

vehicles

or not is a hot issue now. And I think the advantages of

driverless

vehicles

outweigh the disadvantages.

First,

when many

people

use self-driving

car

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cars

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,

car

accidents by drunk driving and

drousy

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drowsy

driving will get lower than now. AI will do the driving role

instead

of

human

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humans

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and there is no possibility that AI get drunk or sleepy,

as a

result

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self-driving

car

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is more

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safe

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safer

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than

car

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cars

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which is driven by

people

. Even though

counterpart

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might argue that there will be a technical problem

while

driving so

people

cannot trust

an

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AI technology 100%, there is a result showing the percentage of mechanical

issue's appearance

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from

driverless

vehicles

is less than 1%. So it proved they are safe.

Second,

people

can spend their time more

efficient

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efficiently

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thanks to self-driving

transportations

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transportation

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. Originally, workers

have

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had

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to drive their

car

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cars

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by themselves and go to the workplace, so they

cannot

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could not

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do other tasks to focus on driving. But it will be changed

into

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so

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they can put more effort into doing their

left

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works

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work

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or enjoying

hobby

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hobbies

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more freely.

Moreover

, if

this

driverless

function is adapted to public

transportations

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transportation

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such

as buses or subways,

then

the role of drivers of these

vehicles

will become more simple.

For example

, they will just supervise the way it goes and when

emergency

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an emergency

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situation occurs, they will get into the situation and give some help. So they can invest their time into developing themselves or learning other things

while

doing their job. In conclusion, in both safety and effectiveness

aspects

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aspects,

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driverless

vehicles

have more benefits than problems. To reduce minor issues of using them, societies and companies need to develop more accurate technologies and well-constructed systems.