The pie charts below show the devices people in the 18 to 25 age group use to watch television in Canada in two different years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The two pie charts provide information about the percentages of
adults
using different devices to watch TV in Canada in the years 2009 and 2019.
Overall
, at the beginning of the period
, the rate
of adults
watching TV on conventional televisions was the highest, while
tablets had the lowest rate
. By contrast
, at the end
of the period
, the rate
of adults
watching TV on conventional televisions dropped dramatically and became the lowest, whereas
flat-screen TVs
and mobile phones became the most used devices.
In 2009, the rate
of adults
watching on
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TVs
was 34%, which Fix the agreement mistake
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the lowest Change preposition
at
rate
of 4% by the end of the period
. However
, at the beginning of the period
, the rates of adults
watching on laptops and desktop computers were 20% and 18%, respectively. By 2019, the percentages
of Fix the agreement mistake
percentage
adults
watching on laptops and desktop computers decreased slightly to 12% each.
The rate
of people watching on tablets was the lowest at 5% in 2009 but became the third most used
device by the end of the Add a hyphen
most-used
period
. In 2009, the rates of adults
watching on mobile phones and flat-screen TVs
were 15% and 8%, respectively. By 2019, the rates of adults
watching on mobile phones and flat-screen TVs
were the highest at around 27% each.Submitted by nguyenvuthaison3005 on
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