The bar charts show education data related to young adults aged 15 years old in 10 different countries in 2015. The first chart shows in which countries adolescents do the most homework in terms of the hours per week. The second chart shows the nations that scored the best on an international science test. Summarise the data by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given graphs illustrate the time
with
young adults spent on homework in 10 countries and the top science score Change preposition
apply
according to
the International Standards in
2015. Surprisingly, the hours
spent studying at home do not correlate with the results on later records of percentages achieved.
According to
the data, in Italy teenagers are spending around 8.5 hours
on average per week, however
, the Finish pupils are tending
to receive the highest grade. It is very unusual as kinds in Finland are spending less time sitting with their books, moreover
, they have a very good school and educational system that represents those brilliant results.
In the
countries, Correct article usage
apply
such
as China, Canada and Taiwan pupils are very successful based on scale, therefore
in Canada for instance
they tend to spend around 5.7 hours
per week studying. Whereas
, Americans do their homework 6.1 hours
per week and receive the lowest score of 516, to compare with other countries. A very balanced stage in which Australian young adults in, they leave approximately 5.9 hours
of their time studying and then
get a 526 score, which places them in the middle statistically.Submitted by krisjeffay on
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