The diagram below shows how a biofuel called ethanol is produced. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The diagram illustrates the process by which
ethanol
, a type of biofuel, is produced from Use synonyms
plants
and trees.
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Overall
, there are eight main stages in Linking Words
this
process, starting with the growth of Linking Words
plants
and ending with the emission of Use synonyms
carbon
dioxide when Use synonyms
ethanol
is used as fuel.
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Firstly
, Linking Words
plants
and trees absorb sunlight and Use synonyms
carbon
dioxide through photosynthesis to grow. Once they have fully matured, they are harvested by farmers and delivered to the pre-processing stages, where the harvested Use synonyms
plants
are cut into smaller pieces or ground to extract cellulose, the main resource for Use synonyms
ethanol
processing.
In the Use synonyms
ethanol
factory, enzymes are added to convert the cellulose into sugars. These sugars are Use synonyms
then
fermented by microbes to produce Linking Words
ethanol
. The Use synonyms
ethanol
is Use synonyms
subsequently
purified to ensure high quality. Linking Words
Finally
, Linking Words
this
purified biofuel is distributed via gasoline stations for various vehicles, including trucks, cars, and planes. The Linking Words
carbon
dioxide emitted from these means of transportation Use synonyms
then
returns to the atmosphere and is reabsorbed by Linking Words
plants
, continuing the Use synonyms
carbon
cycle.Use synonyms
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