The chart below shows the number of adults participating in different major sports in one area, in 1997 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Overall
, number
of adults participating in major Correct article usage
the number
sports
increases
from 1997 to 2017. And the popularity has some changes between these years.
Wrong verb form
increased
Firstly
, the
Correct article usage
apply
participating
Replace the word
participation
number
of most sports
improve except for cricket and swimming. Cricket has the worst performance among all, which
the participating Correct your spelling
with
number
decreases
by about 20 Wrong verb form
decreasing
thousands
. As for swimming, the participating Change to singular
thousand
number
in 2017 remains exactly the same as 1997
Change preposition
in 1997
according to
the figure.
Secondly
, let's look at the rest of sports
. The other sports
that the number
of adults participating increases
the most,
are football, basketball and rugby, with all of them increasing by about 15 Remove the comma
apply
thousands
. Change to singular
thousand
Besides
, tennis increases
by about 5 Wrong verb form
increased
thousands
. As for golf, it slightly Change to singular
thousand
increases
by 1 or 2 thousands
, which is almost the same.
The popularity of these Change to singular
thousand
sports
has changed. In 1997, the most popular sport in this
figure is
tennis, Wrong verb form
was
which
the situation Correct word choice
and
remains
the same in 2017. Wrong verb form
remained
However
, for the least popular sport, it is different. Basketball is
the least popular sport in 1997, Wrong verb form
was
while
cricket becomes
the least popular one in 2017.Wrong verb form
became
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