The pie chart below depicts energy generation by fuel type in the UK in two years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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of energy generation by fuel type in the United Kingdom in 2014 and 2018.

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, the type of oil and other and gas still maintain its percentage, respectively 4 per

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and 30,1 per

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have some changes. In 2014, oil and

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2018.

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, in 2014, renewable became the fourth rank in energy generation with about 15 per

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up to 26.2 per

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, in 2014 they got 22.5 per

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and in 2018 only around 21.6 per

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same portion in different years, which is 30.1%.

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than year 2014. From 28.4 per

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energy generation
fuel type
traditional fuels
renewable energy
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significant increase
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