You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The bar chart shows the monthly spending in dollars of a family in the USA on three items in 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The bar charts
illustrates
the monthly Change the verb form
illustrate
expenditure
in
three items in a Change preposition
for
4 month
period in 2010.
On keen observation, in Add a hyphen
4-month
month
of Add an article
the month
Jan
the most Add a comma
Jan,
money
was spent on food and least
on clothing which showed an odd change in the Feb, with Correct article usage
the least
most
Add an article
the most
money
spent on food and clothing. However
, fluctuation observed
in Add a missing verb
was observed
march
Capitalize word
March
where
Correct word choice
when
overall
the money
expenditure
peaked in all three categories. The fluctuation caused a disparity in april
with spending Change the capitalization
April
Change preposition
on averagely
averagely
the least amount of Change the word
average
money
. Furthermore
, all three Correct your spelling
categories
catergories
Correct your spelling
categories
Unnecessary verb
apply
was
peaked in Verb problem
apply
different
Add an article
a different
Fix the agreement mistake
months
month
Fix the agreement mistake
months
such
as food in Feb, Correct word choice
and clothing
clothing
and gas in April.
Correct word choice
and clothing
Overall
, the average money
expenditure
was maintain
throughout the first 2 months which Change the verb form
was maintained
fluctuate
in Wrong verb form
fluctuated
march
and marked peak Capitalize word
March
monthy
Correct your spelling
monthly
expenditure
, the fluctuation later took a dive in april
.Change the capitalization
April
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "overall".
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words expenditure, money with synonyms.
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