The diagrams below show changes of a cinema from 1980 until now. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The two plans illustrate
development
of a Add an article
the development
cinema
from 1980 to the present.
Overall
, there are some places unchanged like the entry, a ticket room, and toilets. However
, a car park had
removed and replaced by new Verb problem
was
cinema
rooms.
In 1980 , the cinema
buliding
had Correct your spelling
building
the
car park along the south of the building, and Correct article usage
a
cinema
2 was located on the left Capitalize word
Cinema
side
while
a
Correct article usage
apply
cinema
1 in the northwest side
,also
ticket and drinks were situated on the northeast side
. In addition
, the main gate, ticket and toilets remain at the same place.
In
Change preposition
At
the
present, the car park Correct article usage
apply
is
removed and replaced by two cinemas ( Wrong verb form
has been
cinema
3 in the right corner and the
Correct article usage
apply
cinema
2 moved to the opposite side
). Moreover
, cinema
2 old place which is located on the right side
was replaced into
Change preposition
with
cinema
4 and they added Capitalize word
Cinema
cinema
5 next to it. Capitalize word
Cinema
Furthermore
, on the northeast corner are built new room
could relax room next to Fix the agreement mistake
rooms
Food
and drinks area. Correct article usage
the Food
Also
the old place Add a comma
Also,
of
Change preposition
for
drink
is replaced by Add an article
the drink
DVD
shop.Correct article usage
a DVD
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