The two maps below show the site of a college in 2006 and the present day. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The two maps below show the site of a college in 2006 and the present day.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
The two maps represent
the
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Lynwich
college
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College
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in 2006 and how it is now after the modifications .
Overall
, there has been a drastic change in the structure of the
college
within the same available space .
As a result
, the main attraction is the centrally located cafeteria with access to all other facilities .
In addition
to that, most of the trees
with in
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the compound have been preserved . The cafeteria located in the middle with corridors to the main facilities is the main attraction of the present-day
college
.
Whereas
in the past it was a path connecting the second
college
building to the library .
While the
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trees between the two
college
buildings have been removed and the library occupies that area now .
Whereas
,the trees towards the road have been preserved with
an
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addition of
bus
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a bus
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stop in the previous car park location . There is an addition of
sports
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a sports
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centre and bike storage in the new
college
by restructuring the previous location . The tree behind the old library is still there but now it is behind
sports
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the sports
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centre
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Vocabulary: Replace the words college with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • underwent significant changes
  • consisted of
  • large open space
  • utilized
  • relocated
  • limited facilities and amenities
  • wider range of facilities and amenities
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