The two maps below show the site of a college in 2006 and the present day. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The two maps represent
the
Lynwich Correct article usage
apply
college
in 2006 and how it is now after the modifications .
Capitalize word
College
Overall
, there has been a drastic change in the structure of the college
within the same available space .As a result
, the main attraction is the centrally located cafeteria with access to all other facilities .In addition
to that, most of the trees with in
the compound have been preserved .
The cafeteria located in the middle with corridors to the main facilities is the main attraction of the present-day Correct your spelling
within
college
. Whereas
in the past it was a path connecting the second college
building to the library . While the
trees between the two Correct word choice
The
college
buildings have been removed and the library occupies that area now .
Whereas
,the trees towards the road have been preserved with an
addition of Correct article usage
the
bus
stop in the previous car park location . There is an addition of Correct article usage
a bus
sports
centre and bike storage in the new Correct article usage
a sports
college
by restructuring the previous location . The tree behind the old library is still there but now it is behind sports
centreCorrect article usage
the sports
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