The chart and table show working hour and salary for 4 different occupationa. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main feature, and make comparison where relevant.

The chart and table show working hour and salary for 4 different occupationa. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main feature, and make comparison where relevant.
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The bar chart and the table compare the working
hours
per week and the yearly salaries of fire
services
,
police
services
,
nurses
and teachers.
Overall
, it is evident that
nurses
spent the longest time on their work among these professions.
Furthermore
, people who did
police
services
were paid the highest.
Nurses
worked for about 55
hours
each week, coming first on the list, nearly twice the 30
hours
reported for teachers, who had the most spare time.
Moreover
, fire
services
cost the firefighters approximately 40
hours
a week as the graph shows, ranking
second,
followed by the
police
service's 35
hours
. Regarding income, the individuals occupied in
police
services
earned 52,050
pounds
annually, around 4,000
pounds
higher than the following fire
services
.
However
,
nurses
only represented a yearly salary of 37,450
pounds
with their overwhelmingly longest working time, and the figure for teachers recorded 33,600
pounds
, which was the lowest of the four occupations.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words hours, services, police, nurses, pounds with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Occupations
  • Salaries
  • Working hours
  • Average
  • Annual
  • Comparison
  • Discrepancies
  • Professions
  • Doctors
  • Teachers
  • Engineers
  • Retail workers
  • Balanced
  • High-paying
  • Low-paying
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