The maps show improvements that have been made to a university campus between 2010 and the present day. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The map illustrates the university
campus
of 2010.
In
the north Change preposition
On
side
of the campus
, there's
the university offices and Wrong verb form
there are
teaching
block for Art and Science. Following the path, there's the student Correct article usage
a teaching
accomodation
following through and a huge Correct your spelling
accommodation
lake
across of
it.
Change preposition
apply
In
the east Change preposition
On
side
of the campus
, there's an enomous
field that was Correct your spelling
enormous
build
. It is filled up with the Wrong verb form
built
lake
, shops, another
Correct quantifier usage
other
accomodation
, and Correct your spelling
accommodation
restaurant
. The Correct article usage
a restaurant
area
is also
filled with trees. The student accomodation
Correct your spelling
accommodation
in
the west Change preposition
on
side
is smaller than the ones in the west, it is also
nearer with
the Change preposition
to
lake
. At the edge of the map, there's a small restaurant
that was build
. Near the Wrong verb form
built
restaurant
, a bit north side
of the restaurant
, there are two shops, completing the area
. At the main attraction of the area
, the lake
is filled with bunch
of Add an article
a bunch
lawn
and seating Fix the agreement mistake
lawns
area
, even if it's considered small, it is still the biggest part of the west Fix the agreement mistake
areas
area
.
In conclusion, the campus
is filled with bunch
of facilities.Add an article
a bunch
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