The diagram provides us with the recent renovations done to a university
campus
from 2010 until now. It is clearly shown that the landscapes are up to date with the new innovative designs. Use synonyms
On
the next part, features of the place will be described.
Change preposition
In
To begin
with, the most Linking Words
eye catching
feature shown is the lake and lawn & seating area which is located in the middle with special features Add a hyphen
eye-catching
such
as the grass. Linking Words
On the
south and west Change preposition
The
shows
the main feature of the Correct subject-verb agreement
show
the
Remove the redundancy
apply
campus
which is student Use synonyms
accomadation
where the buildings look similar with Correct your spelling
accommodation
same
colour but just different height Change the article
the same
level
.
Fix the agreement mistake
levels
On the other hand
, on the east Linking Words
side
there are shops and Add a comma
side,
restaurant
located next to each other. By the road on the north Fix the agreement mistake
restaurants
side
it has Add a comma
side,
teaching
block for art & science Correct article usage
a teaching
student
. On the other side of the road is the location of the university offices.
Taking everything into Fix the agreement mistake
students
concideration
, the improvements done to the Correct your spelling
consideration
campus
are really up to date with the trend now. But there are things they need to improve which is growing some grass Use synonyms
in
the Change preposition
on
campus
inable to have Use synonyms
a
Change the article
an
eyecatching
and not a dry lawn.Correct your spelling
eye-catching
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