The tables give information on the temperatures and the hours of daylight in two particular cities in the same week in May 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The tables give information on the temperatures and the hours of daylight in two particular cities in the same week in May 2007. 

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
the thesis tables demonstrate the weather
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information
for both London and
sudney
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Sydney
. it is clear from
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that London is coldest than
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sydney
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,
according to
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the coldest day was on
friday
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29th .
furthermore
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the
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on
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and
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is steady . the sunset
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one
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minute every day
.
however
, the sunrise is the same
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saturday
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29th and
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sunday
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30th ,
in addition
,
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