The map shows the town of Stokeford in 1930 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The map,
which
depicts the revolution of Stokeford town over an 80-year period (1930 to 2010).
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Overall
, it can be observed that there have been significant changes to infrastructure, housing, and healthcare systems. Plus, the farmlands were totally diminished over the given timeline.
Diving deeper, in 1930, there were merely a minority of houses situated in the north of the town. However
, the residential area experienced the biggest development in 2010, with a host of housing that was added alongside the Stoke River to accommodate the increasing population. Furthermore
, an education institution in the east also
saw a considerable augment but no facilities were installed, and in front of it, a post office has remained for over 80 years.
Turning to the farmlands that were initially
situated on the left of the school and river stoke, they were diminished completely in 2010, leaving vast and empty areas. Finally
, a big house was converted into a retirement home, though the size was reduced by half since the gardens in front of it were cut.Submitted by xeyojnn on
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