The maps below show the centre of a small twon called Islip is it is now, and plans for its development. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The maps provide data on how the
centre
of a small lslip
town will change in the future.
Correct your spelling
little
Overall
, the road will surround Correct article usage
the lslip
lslip
town Correct your spelling
slip
Islip
centre
and many facilities will be added after development.
Looking at the maps more closely, one can see that shops plan to reduce from two shops to one shop, which is located in the centre
of the map. Furthermore
, the main road and shop located below will replace a lot of facilities such
as a bus station, shopping centre
, car park and new housing. Moreover
, housing in the below map and park reduces spaces. By contrast
, schools do not alter location.
In conclusion, Correct article usage
the lslip
lslip
town Correct your spelling
slip
Islip
centre
will become urbanisation and have greater facilities in the years to come.Submitted by garim4645 on
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