A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: •give contact details for when you are away •give instructions on how to care for your pet •describe other household duties You should write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ..................,
#friend #house #pet #holiday #•give #contact #instructions #care #•describe #household #duties #addresses
Dear Saniya,
Hope
this
letter of mine finds you in good health and in high spirits . For 2 years my family planning for this
holiday. Finally
, we are going to Egypt for 7 days and I am very happy that you agree
to look after my house and pet. As you know how I love my sniffer please make sure to call her doctor in case you Wrong verb form
have agreed
need
. We have a flight on 12th May so you have to come the next day to manage. You can contact me on WhatsApp number 45546566.As we are already on Snapchat I will be available there and in case of emergency you can contact my uncle if I am not able to connect with you at that time for that, I already Correct pronoun usage
need it
write
it down in my Wrong verb form
wrote
dairy
for you which is kept on Correct your spelling
diary
coffee
table behind the window.
You already know how much I Add an article
the coffee
concerned
about my Snifer he is not only my pet but Add a missing verb
am concerned
also
my small brother so for him, you have to be punctual about his meals. Although
you are also
a pet lover that's why I feel relieved you must know that Snifer is allergic to carrots and curd so must avoid giving this
. Moreover
, for medication, you have to give 3 deworming tablets for two days and make sure that he will sleep in his bed only not on the carpet or sofa at night. Hope you do not find it difficult for
Change preposition
in
this
condition.
Another household task which is important to know is that we have a water motor which works manually so you have to make sure to on and off timely . Perhaps wifi and parcels were coming in between these days for that just sign on receiving paper as payment was already done.Anyhow you need instructions for digital appliances you must read the diary kept there in the upper self of kitchen
.Hope you find it easy and comfortable Correct article usage
the kitchen
while
doing all these responsibilities.
See you soon,
SinjaSubmitted by sinjatiwari15 on
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coherence cohesion
Try to structure your paragraphs more clearly, making sure that each paragraph conveys a single clear idea. This will help your friend understand your instructions better.
coherence cohesion
Be mindful of minor grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. For example, 'already write it down in my dairy' should be 'already written it down in my diary.' Proofreading can catch these issues.
task achievement
Although more detailed instruction is good for clarity, ensure that sentences are concise and information is easy to follow. You can achieve this by checking for run-on sentences and breaking them into simpler sentences.
task achievement
You have addressed all the required points: contact details, pet care instructions, and household duties.
task achievement
The tone of the letter is friendly and appropriate for the context, making it a pleasant read for your friend.
coherence cohesion
You included specific and practical details that will help your friend manage the house and pet effectively.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite