The chart shows information about various professions in the UK and their salaries. The table shows the average working hours per week for each profession.

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informations

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information

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about the

saliaries

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salaries

of various professions in the UK

while

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the table shows the basic working

hours

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per week for each profession.Well,there are many notable things that can be observed.

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,we can see that

underground

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driver

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has the highest

salary

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this

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teachers and firefighters have the highest working

hours

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with approximately 55 working

hour

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for both. On the one hand,we can see that

nurse

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and police are

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the bottom of the list with the

lowst

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lowest

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when started and after three years.

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driver

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has the highest

salary

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in both starting

salary

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and after three years

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10,000

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,we can observe

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of things in the table.First of all, firefighters and teachers are

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the top of the list with nearly 55 our of working in each.

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, underground

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driver

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and police have approximately the same working

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.underground

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driver

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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words hours, driver, salary with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
3
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
26
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

172 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

salary levels
disparities
correlation
average working hours
job satisfaction
work-life balance
earning potential
personal time
economic impact
social impact
job demand
skill levels
broad economy
profession
community contribution

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The chart shows information about various professions in the UK and their salaries. The table shows the average working hours per week for each profession.

Some people believe that if an individual behaves in an anti-social manner, such as committing a crime, then society is to blame. What are the causes of anti-social behavior? Who do you think is responsible?*

Task 1 You have seen an advertisement for part-time job at a restaurant and want to apply for it. Write a letter to the manager. In your letter: -describe your experience -tell him why you are interested in the job -say why you think you would be suitable for the job

In many countries today, if people want to find work, they have to move away from their families and friends. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

In many countries, traditional dress and costumes are considered effective ways of maintaining links with the past. How effective can traditional costumes be, in this sense? What other ways exist to help citizens connect with a country’s past?

Today, many people use the internet and smartphones to transfer money to friends, family, and businesses. Do you think it is a negative or positive development?