A magazine wants to include contributions from its readers for an article called 'The book that influenced me the most’. a Write a letter to the editor of the a magazine about the book that influenced you most. In your letter, • describe what this book was about • explain how this book influenced you • say whether this book would be likely to influence other people
Dear Sir,
I saw an article in yesterday's magazine that if anyone wants to contribute an article in a magazine about " The
book
that influenced me the most". I am writing this
letter to show my interest in that and see if i
can get a chance to Change the capitalization
I
tell
about my favourite Verb problem
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book
.
Basically, I read motivational books or books that are based on real life
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real-life
story
rather than fictional books. Fix the agreement mistake
stories
However
, my top most favourite book
is "Rich dad
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Dad
poor dad
". Correct your spelling
Poor Dad
This
book
was about a young boy who was born in poverty, but how he changed his destiny and become
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became
very
young age.
Honestly, before reading Add an article
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this
book
I always used to fear to do something new. Nevertheless
, this
book
gave me the courage that if you have a strong will power
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willpower
then
you can achieve anything in life. At present, because of this
book
I never say no to new opportunities that Add a comma
book,
comes
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come
in
my way.
I am certain that there are hundreds of people just like me who Change preposition
apply
has
the same fear, the one I used to have. Change the verb form
have
That is
why, I want to take this
opportunity to encourage all those people with my personal story. I believe they would relate themselves
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apply
with
my story and will read Change preposition
to
this
book
and will
start doing the impossible things. I would really appreciate Verb problem
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if
you Correct pronoun usage
it if
can
provide me Wrong verb form
could
this
golden chance.
I look forward to hearing back.
Yours faithfully,
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with this
Samandeep
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Sandeep
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task achievement
Ensure to proofread for minor grammatical errors and inconsistencies. For example, 'an article in a magazine' should be 'the magazine' or 'the article in the magazine.'
single idea per paragraph
Make sure each paragraph presents a single main idea clearly and develops it fully. This enhances the readability and coherence of the text.
task achievement
You have effectively addressed all parts of the prompt, describing the book, its impact on you, and its potential impact on others.
suitable writing tone
The letter is polite and appropriately formal, making it suitable for the context of writing to an editor.
logical structure
The letter is well-organized, with distinct paragraphs for each aspect of the prompt, which makes it easy to follow.
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