The table below shows how the UK unemployed spent their time last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The figure presents the usage of
time
of the UK unemployed last
year.
Overall
, both men
and women
spent their time
on Housework
, Shopping and Job Hunting in the morning. However
, in the afternoon, something changed. Men
tended to watch TV and did
some gardening work, Wrong verb form
do
while
women
were more likely to do housework
, shopping and visiting
friends or relatives.
In the morning, 22% of Wrong verb form
visit
men
spent time
on job hunting, which was the most. Shopping and housework
had slightly lower percentage
, of 20% and 19%. These three Fix the agreement mistake
percentages
behaviour
were Fix the agreement mistake
behaviours
top
three Correct article usage
the top
men
doing before lunch. Though the top three were the same, about 50% of women
spent their time
on housework
, which was much more than men
.
As for the behaviour in the afternoon, 14% of the men
would watch TV, which is the most. Gardening, visiting friends and relatives, and job hunting are almost the same as watching TV. Women
, however
, still did their housework
in the afternoon, for around 20%.Submitted by sophialin61328 on
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words time, men, women, housework with synonyms.
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