The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.

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The pie charts

illustrates

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illustrate

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the average amount of three unhealthy nutrients, namely,

sodium

, saturated fat, and added sugars,in regular meals,all of which can be unhealthy if

consume

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consumed

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way more than it should.

Overall

, the proportion of

sodium

in dinner ranked

first,

which was followed by

satured

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saturated

fat.

However

, added sugar was consumed mostly in

snacks

. With regard to

sodium

, dinner reached the peak by 43%,

then

lunch which was consumed by just more than the quarter.

Finally

beakfast

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breakfast

along with

snacks

were the least meals in terms of including

sodium

with

approximatl

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approximately

approximate

14%.

Furthermore

, saturated fat nutrients

persentages

Correct your spelling

percentages

were roughly close to

sodium

. The only difference regarded is that

snacks

placed third followed by breakfast(16%).

On the other hand

, added sugar fractions were a little different.That ingredient in

snacks

was the highest,

wereas

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whereas

it was the lowest in the other nutrients. Meanwhile breakfast

persentage

Correct your spelling

percentage

was in the 20s, it has slightly decreased to 19%.

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