You stayed at a friend’s house last weekend. Write a letter thanking them for their hospitality. In your letter: - Describe what you enjoyed about the stay. - Mention something specific about their home. - Invite them to your place in return.

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Dear Shizune, I hope you are doing well. I am writing

this

letter to thank you

about

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for

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your kindness and hospitality towards me. The

last

week was

most

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the most

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memorable week of my life. I enjoyed a lot in your place. I really enjoyed that bonfire,

specially

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your song which reminds me

our

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of our

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childhood. It was so

overwelming

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overwhelming

for me.

Moreover

, our

barbique

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barbeque

barbecue

party was

best

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the best

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part of the week. I

also

wanted to say that your house interior was literally

eyecatching

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eye-catching

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sweeming

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swimming

sweeping

pool and backyard make your house more attractive. The grassy mat on your balcony was stunning. I loved

overall

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the overall

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look of your home. I talked about your little angel to my family.

Therefore

, they all were so excited to see her and meet her

In-person

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in person

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. I will be really glad if you visit my home next month with your family. My family and me waiting for you to spend time together. Waiting for your positive reply. See you soon. Your lovingly, Jacob.

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task achievement

Your letter covers all the necessary points: thanking your friend, mentioning specific aspects of their home, and inviting them to your place. However, you can improve clarity by avoiding small language errors such as 'overwelming' instead of 'overwhelming' and 'sweeming' instead of 'swimming'.

coherence cohesion

To improve coherence and logical structure, make sure your ideas flow smoothly. You have good sentences but transitioning between them can be better. For example, instead of jumping directly from the bonfire to the barbecue party, add a sentence that connects them.

task achievement

Your letter is warm and genuine, which makes the writing tone suitable for a friendly letter.

coherence cohesion

The way you described the specific parts of the house, such as the swimming pool and the grassy mat, really helped to visualize the setting.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

164 words

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