You stayed at a friend’s house last weekend. Write a letter thanking them for their hospitality. In your letter: - Describe what you enjoyed about the stay. - Mention something specific about their home. - Invite them to your place in return.

Dear Shizune, I hope you are doing well. I am writing
this
letter to thank you
about
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your kindness and hospitality towards me. The
last
week was
most
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the most
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memorable week of my life. I enjoyed a lot in your place. I really enjoyed that bonfire,
specially
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your song which reminds me
our
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of our
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childhood. It was so
overwelming
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overwhelming
for me.
Moreover
, our
barbique
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barbeque
barbecue
party was
best
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the best
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part of the week. I
also
wanted to say that your house interior was literally
eyecatching
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.
sweeming
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swimming
sweeping
pool and backyard make your house more attractive. The grassy mat on your balcony was stunning. I loved
overall
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look of your home. I talked about your little angel to my family.
Therefore
, they all were so excited to see her and meet her
In-person
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in person
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. I will be really glad if you visit my home next month with your family. My family and me waiting for you to spend time together. Waiting for your positive reply. See you soon. Your lovingly, Jacob.
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task achievement
Your letter covers all the necessary points: thanking your friend, mentioning specific aspects of their home, and inviting them to your place. However, you can improve clarity by avoiding small language errors such as 'overwelming' instead of 'overwhelming' and 'sweeming' instead of 'swimming'.
coherence cohesion
To improve coherence and logical structure, make sure your ideas flow smoothly. You have good sentences but transitioning between them can be better. For example, instead of jumping directly from the bonfire to the barbecue party, add a sentence that connects them.
task achievement
Your letter is warm and genuine, which makes the writing tone suitable for a friendly letter.
coherence cohesion
The way you described the specific parts of the house, such as the swimming pool and the grassy mat, really helped to visualize the setting.
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