The maps below show the changes that have taken place at Queen Mary Hospital since its construction in 1960. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show the changes that have taken place at Queen Mary Hospital since its construction in 1960.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The figures illustrate the development that has occurred in Queen Mary Hospital and have been constructed from 1960 to 2000. As can be seen, the most noticeable is that to the left hospital
area
.
To begin
, there were some buildings
such
as a shopping
centre
and farmland to the left, the hospital and a car park to the right 1960. After that, by 1980, the shopping
centre
had been removed and divided into a cancer
centre
and pharmacy that joined with the main hospital building.
Moreover
, the farmland behind the shopping
centre
was changed by the nursing school in 1980.
Subsequently
, there were several major changes in the western
area
. By 2000, the cancer
centre
had been expanded,
then
the nursing school had been rejected
while
the nursing building just was moved
in
Change preposition
to
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the right side.
Consequently
, the car park
area
had been reduced into 2 offices because the nursing
area
had joined together behind the hospital building.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words area, centre with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • infrastructural evolution
  • healthcare facilities
  • technological advancements
  • capacity expansion
  • modernization efforts
  • historical layout
  • landscape adaptation
  • access routes
  • renovation and improvement
  • initial structure
  • environmental considerations
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