The graph below gives information about the number of people who smoked cigarettes in the UK between 2011 and 2021. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart represents information about the number of people who smoked smokes in the United Kingdom from 2011 to 2021.
Overall
, it can be seen that men form the most millions of people who use tobacco in their lives, while
women are observed to lower than them. Over the same period, the users saw a decline.
From 2011 to 2013, both genders gradually plummeted to a slight 0.9 and a significant 2.5 from about 3.6 and 4.1 in 2011, and around 1.9 and 2.7, respectively. In the next 6 years
, the diagram stabilized, including an increase in the first year and the last
two years
, and a decrease in the gap of three years
that shows that the men decreased by a percentage of 0.5, and the women by the
proportion of a slight 0.1.
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of period, the number of users dramatically fell to around 1.2 and 0.7 from about 2.2 and 1.3, respectively.Submitted by sodoo on
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