The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates what
percentage
of weekly earning
of families spent on 7 categories in one country in 1968 and 2018. Fix the agreement mistake
earnings
Overall
, in 1968 the highest percentage
of families’ income
was spent on Food but in 2018 the highest percentage
of income
was expanded to Leisure.
As can be seen, in 2018, people expanded
roughly 17% of their weekly Verb problem
spent
income
on Food but in 1968 Food was the most noticeable subject which
35% of Correct your spelling
with
earning
spent on Fix the agreement mistake
earnings
this
category. Evidently, the amount of percentage
of weekly salaries was
spent on Household goods was the same in both years which was approximately 7%.
Spending on Clothing and Unnecessary verb
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footware
, 5% of the weekly Correct your spelling
footwear
income
of families was spent on this
category in 2018 however
in 1968 the amount of
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percentage
which
spent on Correct pronoun usage
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this item
was 2 times more than in 2018. Fix the agreement mistake
these items
On the other hand
, the proportion of income
was
spent on Housing was 10% Unnecessary verb
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while
, in 2018 this
figure reached to
just lower than 20%.Change preposition
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, income with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 5 times.
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