The diagram below illustrates the process where bricks are made for the building industry. Summarie the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. The diagram below illustrates the process where bricks are made for the building industry. Summarie the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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steps in the preparation of

clay

bricks

at the industrial level.

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, the total process involves seven steps, starting from the

clay

( key material ) until the newly prepared

bricks

are

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distributed among the customers.

First,

the key ingredient, the

clay

is digged by large diggers .

Secondly

, those large

clay

chunks are crushed by rollers and a metal grid.

Then

, the fine

clay

particles are mixed with sand and water, before they are being

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by the use of moulds manually, or by wire cutters mechanically. After those wet raw

bricks

are dried inside drying ovens for about 1 to 2 days,

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started.

Subsequently

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inside the kiln which has three steps.

Initially

, the

bricks

are moderately heated in

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to 980

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range. After that, the

bricks

are exposed to the high temperature of around 870

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to 2300

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and

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they are directed to the cooling chamber where they are chilled for about 2 to 3 days.

Finally

, the baked

bricks

are packed nicely and delivered to the customers by using large lorries.