The chart below shows the amount spent on six consumer goods in four European countries.
The bar graph depicts the actual information about
amount
spent on consumer goods between four Add an article
the amount
countries
(Germany,Italy,France,Britain
) in five spheres.
Overall
, Britain
the
biggest share of Add a missing verb
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amount
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the amount
countries
Britain
had the biggest value in each spheres
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sphere
while
Germany.share
the smallest Capitalize word
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of
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the
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amount
,in each of
sphere.
Of the four Change preposition
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countries
,Britain
had the largest amount
of
spent in the sphere of photographic film with the number of 170 thousand pounds sterling,and the sphere of personal stereos had the smallest value in Change preposition
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Britain
.
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lowest
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all Change preposition
among
countries
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