The chart below shows the amount spent on six consumer goods in four European countries.

The chart below shows the amount spent on six consumer goods in four European countries.
The bar graph depicts the actual information about
amount
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the amount
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spent on consumer goods between four
countries
(Germany,Italy,France,
Britain
) in five spheres.
Overall
,
Britain
the
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has the
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biggest share of
amount
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the amount
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spent on consumer goods in all spheres.Compared to other
countries
Britain
had the biggest value in each
spheres
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,
while
Germany.
share
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the smallest
of
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the
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amount
,in each
of
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sphere. Of the four
countries
,
Britain
had the largest
amount
of
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spent in the sphere of photographic film with the number of 170 thousand pounds sterling,and the sphere of personal stereos had the smallest value in
Britain
. Germany with the industry of
Cds
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,perfumes,Tennis racquets,Personal stereos,Toys,
Photographic
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and Photographic
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film had the
smallest
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lowest
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value
between
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among
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all
countries
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words amount, countries, britain with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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