The chart below shows how the UK unemployed spent their time in the year 1982. Write a report to a university lecturer describing the information below.
The figure illustrates how jobless people utilized their time in the UK in the year 1982. The units of measurement are given in percentages.
Overall
, men mostly spent their morning hours searching for jobs and only a few spent that time drinking, sitting around and playing sports. As far as women were concerned, majority
concentrated on Add an article
the majority
housechores
and a few on outdoor activities Correct your spelling
house chores
such
as drinking, playing sport
and walking. In the afternoon, men were either glued Fix the agreement mistake
sports
on
the television or gardening.
Change preposition
to
Firstly
, both gender
had various activities to do despite of failure to secure a job. The malesFix the agreement mistake
genders
,
were mostly seen looking for Remove the comma
apply
an
employment Remove the article
apply
that
is 22% and only between 2-4 per cent spent their time drinking, watching TV and playing Correct pronoun usage
which
sport
in the wee hours.
Fix the agreement mistake
sports
On the other hand
, women majored in house keeping
in both morning and Correct your spelling
housekeeping
in
the afternoon and the number was 49% and 21 per cent respectively. Change preposition
apply
Furthermore
no woman was witnessed staying on the bed or playing games.Add a comma
Furthermore,
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