The bar chart below shows the expenditure of two countries in consumer goods in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The figure shows the
selling
of two different countries on several products in a specific year.
Replace the word
sales
Overall
, cars produced the greatest value in both France and the UK, while
cameras
and perfume performed the worst respectively. Among these products, cameras
had the largest difference
; while
computers had the smallest.
Selling cars were
the most profitable Change the verb form
was
industries
in these two countries, with Fix the agreement mistake
industry
the
number of 400,000 Correct article usage
a
pounds
in France, and around 450,000 pounds
in the UK. As for the least, cameras
and perfume got about 150,000 and 140,000 pounds
respectively.
Secondly
, let's look at the biggest difference
between these two places, which is in the category of cameras
. From the bar chart, we can obtain
that the UK got more money from Verb problem
see
camera
industry than France, with a Correct article usage
the camera
difference
of roughly 200,000 pounds
. As for the smallest, it falls into the category of computers, with a slight difference
of around 30,000 pounds
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words cameras, difference, pounds with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "difference" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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