The bar chart below shows the expenditure of two countries in consumer goods in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below shows the expenditure of two countries in consumer goods in 2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The figure shows the
selling
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of two different countries on several products in a specific year.
Overall
, cars produced the greatest value in both France and the UK,
while
cameras
and perfume performed the worst respectively. Among these products,
cameras
had the largest
difference
;
while
computers had the smallest. Selling cars
were
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was
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the most profitable
industries
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industry
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in these two countries, with
the
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a
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number of 400,000
pounds
in France, and around 450,000
pounds
in the UK. As for the least,
cameras
and perfume got about 150,000 and 140,000
pounds
respectively.
Secondly
, let's look at the biggest
difference
between these two places, which is in the category of
cameras
. From the bar chart, we can
obtain
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see
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that the UK got more money from
camera
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the camera
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industry than France, with a
difference
of roughly 200,000
pounds
. As for the smallest, it falls into the category of computers, with a slight
difference
of around 30,000
pounds
.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words cameras, difference, pounds with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "difference" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.

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