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The bar chart below shows the popularity of well-known Instagram accounts in 2018 and 2021. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below shows the popularity of well-known Instagram accounts in 2018 and 2021. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The supplied
bar
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chart
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 specifics concerning the
number of
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popularity of well-known Instagram accounts from the years 2018 and 2021.
Overall
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 from a closer inspection of the
graph
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 it is obvious that
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bar
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the bar
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chart
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 showed a
davnnard
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downward
 trend
while
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 the trend of
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bar
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the bar
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chart
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withessed
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was
the
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reverse
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. The figure
of
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bar
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the bar
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chart
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 started the period meaningfully higher than
other
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another bar chart
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bar
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chart
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 at 325 million. The figure increased slightly in 2018 before starting to
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plummet
 remarkably ending with 240 million in the given period. Contrary to that it can be
compare
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 hended
bar
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chart
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. There was a
climbed
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 up with from 240 million
caveusely
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conversely
 to the year 2018

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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 71%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words bar, chart with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 6 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • bar chart
  • popularity
  • Instagram accounts
  • growth
  • decline
  • comparison
  • remained stable
  • significant change
  • new entries
  • exits
  • patterns
  • trends
  • noteworthy
  • notable
  • fluctuation
  • predominant
  • dominant
  • proliferation
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