You need a website for your business, and you would like to ask your friend to build it. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter •Include a brief description of your business •Explain what you would like to have on the website •Provide some ideas on the use of images on the website.
Hello, my dear friend. I hope
this
letter find
you Change the verb form
finds
good
.
I know that you are working Change the word
well
in
a Change preposition
on
websites
Fix the agreement mistake
website
developing
. I am interested in the new website for my humble business, and I know how responsible men areReplace the word
development
you
. So, I wanted to ask you to Correct pronoun usage
apply
work
with me on my new site. As you know, I have runned
the tiny confectionary with Correct your spelling
run
the
variety of cakes for special events.
Correct article usage
a
Firstly
, I have a lot of pictures of my previous cakes, I think it'll be better to use them in your work
. Moreover
, I have many fedbacks
and reviews from my customers and their children, who enjoyed my cakes on their holidays. Correct your spelling
feedbacks
Besides
, there are many pictures that these children drew for me with their greatings
.
Now Correct your spelling
greetings
then
, I want my site to include an examples
of my Correct the article-noun agreement
examples
an example
work
, prices, and reviews. At
the first Change preposition
On
page
we can insert the history of my bakery, and the story about my dream that Add a comma
page,
come
true.
Let me know, please, if you are interested Wrong verb form
came
to
Change preposition
in working
work
with me.
Best regards, always yours'
.
Anastassia.Correct your spelling
yours
Submitted by anastasia on
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Grammar
Focus on minor grammatical errors such as 'find' should be 'finds', 'run' should be 'run,' 'fedbacks' should be 'feedback,' etc.
Coherence and Cohesion
Enhance coherence by connecting different sections of the letter more smoothly. For example, you can use transitional words like 'However,' 'Additionally,' etc.
Tone
The tone of the letter is friendly and suitable for a personal request.
Task Achievement
The letter includes all required information: a brief description of the business, website content details, and use of images.