With increasing popularity of online learning, some people believe that traditional classroom education will become obsolete. Do you agree? Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of both online and traditional learning methods.
Some individuals think that
face to
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face-to-face
face
education will become antiquated due to
the rise of virtual learning nowadays. The writer disagree
with the above statement. The essay will discuss Change the verb form
disagrees
both
advantages and disadvantages of both
virtual and face to
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face-to-face
face
learning methods.
To begin
with, the merits of both
face to
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face-to-face
face
and virtual learning methods are, first of all with the advancement of technology virtual classes
more
convenient nowadays. One could learn Add a missing verb
are more
at
their own free time Change preposition
in
at
everywhere, anywhere and anytime. Another Change preposition
apply
point
is less cost effectiveness
, Add a hyphen
cost-effectiveness
students
can save enough money for other relevant resources such
as laptops, food and clothes for themselves from the daily transport fares to campus. In contrast
, face to
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face-to-face
face
classes
improves
friendships among Correct subject-verb agreement
improve
students
since they got
to know themselves in class. Another Wrong verb form
get
point
is students
get to know their tutors and offices in
campus. Change preposition
on
The
enjoy campus Correct your spelling
They
lifestyle
Change the noun form
lifestyles
such
as sports, entertainment and others which expose one's talent.
The demerits of both
face to
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face-to-face
face
and virtual classes
are: first of all
network issues and instability. A country like Ghana has Add the comma(s)
all,
unstable
network which has become one of the challenges of online Add an article
an unstable
classes
. Another point
is cost
of shuttle
for Add an article
the shuttle
a shuttle
low -income
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low-income
students
become
a major challenge for daily transport from various homes or Correct subject-verb agreement
becomes
hostel's
to class which sometimes makes most Change noun form
hostels
students
choose virtual classes
. In contrast
, at times there are
unnecessary noise in various classrooms Change the verb form
is
such
as banging
of doors, Add an article
the banging
desk
and chairs which Fix the agreement mistake
desks
distract
ongoing Correct subject-verb agreement
distracts
classes
. Some learners are distracted whenever there is a
slightest noise thereby leading to poor academic performance. Another Change the article
the
point
is non-availability
of enough classroom and learning materials Correct article usage
the non-availability
such
as chairs and desk
, Fix the agreement mistake
desks
well ventilated
and spacious classrooms. Most institutions lack these materials, so it makes Add a hyphen
well-ventilated
face to
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face-to-face
face
learning a bit challenging for both
students
and tutors.
In conclusion, the merits of both
face to
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face-to-face
face
and virtual classes
are convenient, less cost
involve
, Wrong verb form
involved
promotes
friendship and Correct subject-verb agreement
promote
gives
Correct subject-verb agreement
give
students
opportunities to know their tutors. Whereas
the demerits of both
face to
Add a hyphen
face-to-face
face
and virtual classes
are network challenges, cost
of transport, unnecessary noise in classroom
, Add an article
the classroom
non availability
of teaching and learning materialsAdd a hyphen
non-availability
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coherence cohesion
To improve your essay's clarity, consider using more transition phrases between ideas and sections. This will help the flow of the essay and make it easier for the reader to follow.
task achievement
Ensure each point made in the body paragraphs is well supported with relevant examples or detailed explanations. This can further illustrate the points you are making and strengthen your argument.
task achievement
You have provided a balanced discussion by addressing both the advantages and disadvantages of online and traditional learning methods.
coherence cohesion
Your conclusion effectively summarizes the main points discussed in the essay, highlighting the merits and demerits of both learning methods.
Your opinion
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If the question asks what you think, you MUST give your opinion to get a good score.
Don’t leave your opinion until the conclusion.
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