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With increasing popularity of online learning, some people believe that traditional classroom education will become obsolete. Do you agree? Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of both online and traditional learning methods.

#popularity #people #classroom #education #methods
Some individuals think that
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face
 education will become antiquated
due to
 the rise of virtual learning nowadays. The writer
disagree
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 with the above statement. The essay will discuss
both
 advantages and disadvantages of
both
 virtual and
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face
 learning methods.
To begin
 with, the merits of
both
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face
 and virtual learning methods are, first of all with the advancement of technology virtual
classes
more
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 convenient nowadays. One could learn
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 their own free time
at
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everywhere, anywhere and anytime. Another
point
 is less
cost effectiveness
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,
students
 can save enough money for other relevant resources
such
 as laptops, food and clothes for themselves from the daily transport fares to campus.
In contrast
,
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face
classes
improves
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 friendships among
students
 since they
got
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 to know themselves in class. Another
point
 is
students
 get to know their tutors and offices
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 campus.
The
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 enjoy campus
lifestyle
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such
 as sports, entertainment and others which expose one's talent. The demerits of
both
face to
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face
 and virtual
classes
 are: first of
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 network issues and instability. A country like Ghana has
unstable
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an unstable
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 network which has become one of the challenges of online
classes
. Another
point
 is
cost
 of
shuttle
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the shuttle
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 for
low -income
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students
become
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 a major challenge for daily transport from various homes or
hostel's
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 to class which sometimes makes most
students
 choose virtual
classes
.
In contrast
, at times there
are
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 unnecessary noise in various classrooms
such
 as
banging
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the banging
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 of doors,
desk
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 and chairs which
distract
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 ongoing
classes
. Some learners are distracted whenever there is
a
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 slightest noise thereby leading to poor academic performance. Another
point
 is
non-availability
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the non-availability
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 of enough classroom and learning materials
such
 as chairs and
desk
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,
well ventilated
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 and spacious classrooms. Most institutions lack these materials, so it makes
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face
 learning a bit challenging for
both
students
 and tutors. In conclusion, the merits of
both
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face
 and virtual
classes
 are convenient, less
cost
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,
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 friendship and
gives
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students
 opportunities to know their tutors.
Whereas
 the demerits of
both
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face
 and virtual
classes
 are network challenges,
cost
 of transport, unnecessary noise in
classroom
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the classroom
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,
non availability
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 of teaching and learning materials
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coherence cohesion
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task achievement
Ensure each point made in the body paragraphs is well supported with relevant examples or detailed explanations. This can further illustrate the points you are making and strengthen your argument.
task achievement
You have provided a balanced discussion by addressing both the advantages and disadvantages of online and traditional learning methods.
coherence cohesion
Your conclusion effectively summarizes the main points discussed in the essay, highlighting the merits and demerits of both learning methods.

Your opinion

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