The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate at fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013. summarize the information and make comparison where relevant. The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate at fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013. summarize the information and make comparison where relevant.

The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate at fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013. summarize the information and make comparison where relevant. The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate at fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013. summarize the information and make comparison where relevant.
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This
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report derives from the above bar chart which enumerates the percentage of the USA's residents who consumed fast
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in different patterns throughout three several years 2003, 2006, and 2013. As an initial overview, the majority of people in America tend to eat at fast
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restaurants. Not only is
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point clear, but
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the percentages of people who did not eat
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kind of
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at all and who ate it daily had the same tendency. Notably, 17% of humans in the USA ate fast
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many random times every week in 2003;
however
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, the proportion increased and reached a peak in 2006, but it suddenly dropped and hit 16%.
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, eating from these eateries once a week was common in 2006, but less common in 2013.
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, 30% of the folks tried these dishes not more than two times a month in 2003;
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, it hit rock bottom after three years.
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, the number jumped dramatically in 2013 and became 33%.
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this
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point, the proportion of nations who had a healthy lifestyle and tended to eat outside a few times annually was 13% in 2003, but it rose in 2006 and reached 15%,
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remained steady until 2013.
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