Some people prefer to eat at food stands or restaurants. Other people prefer to prepare and eat food at home. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Few
people
are keen to eat outside whereas
, some people
loved
to cook at their Wrong verb form
love
home
. In this
essay, I will describe why this
is the case and why I preferred
to eat Wrong verb form
prefer
home cooked
Add a hyphen
home-cooked
meals
.
First of all, many people
love to eat in fancy restaurants and coffee shops because they don't have enough time
to prepare their food
at home
. Their jobs is
so demanding that they can not get the Change the verb form
are
time
to cook meals
and then
eat it
. Correct pronoun usage
them
For instance
, doctors and nurse
Fix the agreement mistake
nurses
works
long Change the verb form
work
shift
they don't have much Fix the agreement mistake
shifts
time
to prepare their meals
. That's why they look for any suitable restaurant to eat their lunch or dinner so that they can get back to their duties on time
. Eating at the stands or shops also
remove
the hustle of making Correct subject-verb agreement
removes
food
. People
just eat their food
in shops and then
move out without doing any work.
On the other hand
, many people
like me preferences
to eat Replace the word
prefer
home cooked
Add a hyphen
home-cooked
meals
as we know what our food
is made of. We know all the ingredients and their source. It also
provides us the
sense of satisfaction that we are eating clean and hygienic Add the preposition
with the
food
. For example
, a mother who made
different delicious dishes for her kids knows Wrong verb form
makes
that
why those dishes are made Correct word choice
apply
of
and she Change preposition
apply
take
good care of her Change the verb form
takes
kids
health as compared to Change to a genitive case
kid's
kids'
restaurants
Change the noun form
restaurant
meals
. Moreover
, by cooking at home
you can control all the spices according to
your taste and control your dietary habits as well.
In conclusion, some people
likes
to eat in outdoor places to save Change the verb form
like
their
Change the word
the
time
and efforts
required in cooking Fix the agreement mistake
effort
whereas
, other people
including me love to eat home cooked
Add a hyphen
home-cooked
meals
as we can control our diet according to
our health plan and make it according to
our taste.Submitted by ijazwamiq on
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relevant specific examples
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