The first chart below shows energy is used in an average Australian households. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use.

The first chart

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data about used

energy

by households in Australia. The second one

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how greenhouse gas emissions

is take

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from

this

energy

.

Overall

, Australian households use much of

this

energy

for

water-heating

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water heating

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and heating for accommodation in the first char. Water heating and other appliances are required

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majority of

this

energy

in the second

once

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. It is

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clear that in the first chart the

heighest

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highest

energy

, 42% is used for heating

furthermore

the lowest 2%point of

this

energy

is taken by cooling. Other

appliance

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required

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15% of

this

energy

. 7% and 4% portion of

this

energy

spend

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refrigeration and lighting by Australian households. Water heating

system

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consume 32% of

energy

in

greenhouse

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. Other appliances get 28%

energy

and refrigeration demand

2

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times less than other appliances. 15% point electricity directed to heating. Cooling

system

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take

this

energy

5 times less than heating. 8%

from

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this

energy

is had by lighting.