The maps below show the village stokeford in 1930 and 2010

The maps below show the  village stokeford in 1930 and 2010
The maps illustrate the developments that took place in the town of Stokeford between 1930 and 2010.
Overall
, the most significant change is that a growing number of residential houses have been built since 1930.
Also
, one can see that some farmlands have disappeared and new more facilities were constructed by 2010. Between 1930 and 2010, the number of roads increased and some more residential buildings were established alongside the main road.
Additionally
, two shops, which were just right next to the post office, were demolished
whereas
the bridge still remained by 2010. Looking at the maps more closely, the path from the river to the garden disappeared,
while
the primary facility was extended by 2010.
Furthermore
, the garden, which included the large house and some trees
were
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removed, and
this
was replaced by a new retirement home between 1930 to 2010.
In addition
, more residential places were constructed with a short street, which was connected from the main road to the new retirement village.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • demolition
  • residential areas
  • infrastructure
  • urbanization
  • land use
  • farmlands
  • notable buildings
  • layout
  • developments
  • economic growth
  • population growth
  • amenities
  • transformation
  • expansion
  • reconstruction
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