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The table below gives information about the three countries with the highest population. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below gives information about the three countries with the highest population. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table illustrates the proportion of
people
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 who lived in cities in three countries China,
India
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, and the United States of America in 2017 in millions.
Overall
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, it can seen from the above diagram the maximum
people
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 living in China as compared to the other two countries.
Whereas
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 the United States of America had fewer citizens
according to
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 density and
land
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 area. In
India
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, more residents live in less
land
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 area in metropolises. It is conspicuous that in 2017, 58% of the citizens of China lived in cities 1.415 billion and the population increased to 0.39% with 151
people
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 in 9.388
million
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square
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 kilometres. In
India
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, 32% of citizens lived in cities in 2017, 1.354 billion with an increment of 1.11% and lived in 455
people
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 in one kilometre per
square
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 meter and
India
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 has 2.973
million
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square
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 kilometres of
land
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. Probing ahead, the residents of the United States of America were 327
million
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 in the same year with an annual growth of 0.71% and has a density of 36
people
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 per
square
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 kilometre and a
land
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 area has 9.147
million
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square
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 kilometres, but it has more population who lived in large towns 83% in 2017 more than the other two nations.
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