Some people think that we should replace old buildings and houses in cities with more modern buildings. Other people think we should protect old buildings. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Some

people

believe that it is a good idea to demolish

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buildings

and homes in urban areas to make place for modern housing

complex

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,

while

others argue that classic

buildings

should be preserved. I think both views are valid, but I would argue for the protection of

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heritage

buildings

because each country's

culture

and way of living is depicted via these kinds of architectural

buildings

. Modern urban planners believe that the

demolishment

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of old

buildings

is necessary when they are no longer useful. Sometimes, the construction might be too fragile to dwell on or it is difficult to renovate

such

kinds of

buildings

.

For instance

, the famous "White Building", located in Phnom Penh, was destroyed

due to

its

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situation. The authority announced that it was no longer safe for

people

to live in.

Therefore

, the building was removed and a new and modern apartment was being constructed, and expected to be completed by the end of 2025. The proponent of the classical

buildings

would argue that it is important that the locals preserve those types of

buildings

well as it shows the identity of the area. History can be told through these kinds of

architectures

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architecture

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and designs. To illustrate, the housing complex in Battambang province that showcases the way of life of Cambodian

people

during the French colony still exists and it helps

people

, both the

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and the tourists, understand the history of that specific town. Not only that it

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the historical features of the area

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it would

also

help attract more tourists to visit the landmarks to learn more about its

culture

and history. All in all, some

people

might think that it is crucial that the old

buildings

should be demolished and replaced with modern apartments,

whereas

others believe that it is more important to preserve the

buildings

. In my opinion, I am

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the latter since it is imperative that

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culture

and identity of the locals

must

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be protected so that the new generation

are

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fully aware of their origin and

culture

.