The bar chart and table show information about students from abroad studying in four English-speaking countries in 2004 and 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar
chart
provides information about students
studying in the USA
, UK
, Australia
and Canada
in the years 2004 and 2012. The table chart
illustrates the proportion of total student numbers.
Overall
, in the first chart
, the highest number of USA
abroad students
, while
the smallest of
Change preposition
in
Canada
. In contrast
to the second chart
, the bigger proportion of Australia
, whereas
the lowest proportion USA
.
In terms of, in the USA
, 180 foreign students
in 2004, compared to the UK
made up 120, in Australia
130 this
was an increase. Furthermore
in Canada
40 students
. In 2012 USA
, the UK
and Australia
comprised around 210 students
, in contrast
, Canada
decreased by 60 after an 8-year period.
Respectively, in 2004 the higher percentage of students
made up Australia
around 19%, while
Americans 2%, the UK
9% and Canada
made up 5% of students
. Focusing on 2012 Australia
frequently increased 24%, whereas
Americans are unchanging. In contrast
, the UK
surged merely 13%, and Canada
’s rapid growth was 7% after an 8-year period.Submitted by mamashukuruvbobur31 on
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