You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Write at least 150 words. The chart below shows the movement of people from rural to urban areas in three countries and predictions for 2025. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given line graph provides information on: the movement of people from
Add an article
the country
country side
to Correct your spelling
countryside
city
area from 2000 to 2025 . it is obvious that there are some significant changes in the given figures.
Correct article usage
the city
According to
what is shown that
, Indonesia did not change from 2020 to 2025.Correct word choice
apply
Moreover
, Iran have
steadily Change the verb form
has
rise
from 2010 to 2025.Change the verb form
risen
In addition
to Nite five million people movement in Iran on
2025.Change preposition
in
However
, thirty million people immigrate in
Indonesia Change preposition
to
on
2025.Change preposition
in
Furthermore
, Iran
Change noun form
Iran's
drametic
increase from 50 Correct your spelling
dramatic
Correct your spelling
million
millon
to 95 ,Correct your spelling
million
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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