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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Write at least 150 words. The chart below shows the movement of people from rural to urban areas in three countries and predictions for 2025. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Write at least 150 words. The chart below shows the movement of people from rural to urban areas in three countries and predictions for 2025. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given line graph provides information on: the movement of people from
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the country
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country side
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countryside
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 to
city
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the city
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 area from 2000 to 2025 . it is obvious that there are some significant changes in the given figures.
According to
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that
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, Indonesia did not change from 2020 to 2025.
Moreover
, Iran
have
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 steadily
rise
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 from 2010 to 2025.
In addition
 to Nite five million people movement in Iran
on
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in
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 2025.
However
, thirty million people immigrate
in
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to
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 Indonesia
on
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in
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 2025.
Furthermore
,
Iran
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Iran's
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drametic
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dramatic
 increase from 50
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million
millon
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million
 to 95 ,
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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