The charts below show the results of a survey of the primary exercise objectives and locations of a selected group of adults between 20 and 50 years of age. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagram illustrates the statistics about people who
exercise
to show reasons why they exercise
, and where they prefer to do that. Overall
, the majority of people choose to exercise
seeking recreation and muscle toning, and they prefer to do that in public sports venues mostly.
First and foremost, although
a variety of goals that you may gain for exercise
, recreation and muscle toning are the most important things 40% and 25%, respectively, of the population want to have these things as a result
. On the other hand
, when it comes to weight loss, disease prevention and mood improvements the numbers show a decline as they are not priorities for the nation.
Secondly
, although
gyms are well known as places for exercise
, public sports venues have a higher percentage forming 35% of the pie, followed by parks which 20% of the society considers exercising there is a privilege. Moreover
, gyms, playgrounds and other public places have formed 15 each, as they were the least chosen places for exercise
.Submitted by okalqusay on
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