The table below shows the number of student who went abroad for further education from eight countries in 2005 and 2015, and the precentage change betwwen 2005 and 2015
Nowadays, everyone is searching for a better place to learn. The presented table demonstrates the
quantity
of individuals who want to travel overseas to obtain higher Change the quantifier
number
curriculum
in distinct countries from the period 2005 to 2015, and the proportion in the same period.
Fix the agreement mistake
curricula
Overall
, while
China initially
dominated the quantity, Brazil has
the highest percentage change.
Brazil had peaked at 109% from 11000 to 23000 Wrong verb form
had
students
. In China and India, the figure of students
approximately doubled from , 413000 and 130000 to , 818000 and 256000 respectively. Germany's ratio exceeds by 44% from 77000 students
to 111000 students
. The number of students
in the United States gradual
increased from 218000 to 325000.
Change the adjective
gradually
On the other hand
, South Korea's rate and number remained static at 107000. However
, Canada's percentage plummeted to 27% from 37000 to 27000. Japan's ratio hit the trough of proportion by minus 36%.Submitted by mohannadsme on
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