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that , nowadays , some
people
spend their property recklessly .
However
, other
people
trying to save
money
for their
future
. In my opinion,
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strongly agree that
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saving
money
is an important and good thing for the
future
.
On one hand , it is undeniable that saving
money
is so important for several reasons.
To begin
with , it can help you in your emergency things that demand a lot of
money
in the
future
. In
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, if any disease ,
such
as cancer ,which
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of
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in the
future
,
this
money
that you saved
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your
future
will help you to receive medication and to get a
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treatment .
For example
, my dad, always whan he was a teenager until now , he saves a small
of his salary to our
future
and encourage us to do the same ,
due to
his
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that we will need it one day in the
future
.
In addition
, there are
also
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of reasons for my agreement.
Furthermore
, to be an independent person in the
future
. In
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, it could easily help
people
children to rely on their selves
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the
future
and learn how to use
money
wisely ,
as well as
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not try to
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someone to lend
youCorrect pronoun usage
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some
money
. For
, if you graduate from school , and you want to go to a big university that costs a fortune , how will you go there
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could notWrong verb form
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even save your
money
for it ? So , it is an important thing to save your
money
from
youngCorrect article usage
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age to the
future
for these things.
In conclusion , various
of Change preposition
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people
believe that saving
money
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the
future
is important ,
to its benefits ,
such
as being independent .
However
, others
againstAdd a missing verb
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that, and
saidWrong verb form
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that we live for only one time and we have to enjoy it and spend our
money
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anything we want ,without caring about the
money
in the
future
,
as well as
not
saveWrong verb form
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it for the
future
.